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The Secret to Proper ParagraphingThe Secret to Proper Paragraphing by OokamiKasumi
Once you know what your characters and doing and saying, how do you get all that down on Paper without ending up with a huge confusing mess?
Putting the Story on Paper.
Everybody knows that when a new speaker speaks they get a new paragraph, right? In other words, you DON'T put two different people talking in the same paragraph. Okay, yeah, so anyone who has written any kind of fiction learns this pretty darned quick, (usually from their readers.)
What nobody seems to get is that the same goes for a new character's ACTIONS. Seriously, when a new character ACTS they're supposed to get their own paragraph -- even if they don't speak!
In short, you paragraph by change in CHARACTER -- not because they speak, but because they ACT. Ahem... Dialogue is an ACTION. In other words, the reason you don't put two different characters' Dialogue in the same paragraph is BECAUSE you don't mix two characters' Actions. Okay?
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So as most people have noticed with me i have once again been inactive...fail
The reasoning is simple:
2) College (try to use all my time to get A's LOL)
3) Need to update my pc (this is where the job helps )
Welp thats mostly it. I will mention i am enrolled in 2 art classes that takes alot of my time compared to other classes because i want to work the best i can on the art pieces. But omgggggggggggzzzzzzzz do i get bored with it. Ok not so much bored as in i want to do something different other then spending hours and hours each day working on the same piece.... i mean i do enjoy it bc it is art. so i will always love doing it. Its just when you dont have free time everything... eeeverything will make you annoyed that you dont have free time. I literally have to sleep at a friends house to hang with them just in the morning for a few hours. LOL
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